Research and Planning: Treatment

This is my first treatment for my teaser trailer:

• There would be a computer screen looking like the Facebook website, with facts and figures about Facebook, interspersed with images of people having a good time. The facts will become more and more negative about how people are harassed and even bullied on social networking sites.
• Theme made non-digetic music, which is catchy and popular, maybe slow, scary, child-like to start off with, and begins to get faster throughout.
• The computer screen then goes to black, and the words 'offline' shows up (which is an idea for the title of the film). It then cuts to a girl at her computer, wondering what has happened to the screen, which suddenly reappears with one notification from Facebook, it reads 'your worst nightmare has tagged a photo of you'. The picture includes her and her friends, but with her face either scribbled out, or an image of how she going to die.
• It then cuts to a scene in a busy internet cafe, where there is a different girl, who gets the same notification, and this time the picture is of her at present. She is looking around, wondering who could of took this picture. The camera would be boxing her in and making her look issolated, with lots of high angles.